Hotel Illness


Another week of 100 word song and the writing increases in quality. There were so many good entries. Poems, songs, and some terrific fiction. One of the best was from my friend Michael Webb aka @spudrph from http://innocentsaccidentshints.blogspot.com/2012/02/100-word-song-im-leaving.html I’m Leaving conveyed so much. Mostly, that miscommunication can kill a relationship. The couple in his short story lost their light. The results were life changing. So, Michael got to pick this week’s song. He and I share a love of my hometown band, Atlanta’s The Black Crowes. One of their best songs is called Hotel Illness. It’s a great choice for 100 word song. The rules are almost non-existent. You give me 100 words inspired by this week’s choice of tune. Keep it at an even 100 and get it in by Tuesday, 7pm, February 21st. Here’s my 100….it’s a continuation of my widowed father story. While he and his teenage daughter are walking to get gas, he remembers first meeting her mom.

“I want you to get me high.”

He laughed through mouthing the word “no”.

“We’re in paradise, thousands of miles from home. We’ve told each other our life stories. You’ve done drugs. I haven’t. “

This blonde-haired, blue-eyed woman, layed out in a blue bikini on his hotel room balcony, was asking someone she’d known for two days to procure drugs in a foreign country.

“Where in Cancun should I find your poison?”

She sat up. Sun-baked tresses danced on her tanned shoulders.

“There’s a band staying here. The drummer hit on me when I checked in. Trust me, he’s holding.”

 

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Leeroy approves, here’s my Atlanta rock and roll brothers, The Black Crowes, with Hotel Illness

About Lance

Anxiety ridden, punk rock listening, word nerd, music obsessed, robot-human hybrid husband, father, red velvet cake enthusiast, pumpkin pie expert and writer living with 4 women and not talking about Fight Club.

Posted on February 15, 2012, in 100 words, beauty, drugs, fiction, music, writing exercise and tagged , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 31 Comments.

  1. Oooh , hate to admit it, but this sounds all too familiar. Good one.
    eden

  2. I love The Black Crowes though I am not familiar with this song. I’m enjoying this new story. Keep working on it. It’s looking fantastic.

  3. Between the subject matter and the artist, this one will be tough. I know quite a bit about one, and next to nothing about the other, and I hope my 100 words don’t let on as to which is which…

  4. How can I match that story? I can’t. My brain is on creative hiatus this week. BUT! There is always a but with me…I have given you an award. I know…it’s like it’s all about me…but it’s not. You can choose to particpate or not…I just want you to know that you and your writing are appreciated!

    http://imasassyblonde.wordpress.com/2012/02/15/an-award-for-me/

  5. The chick sounds a little more drug savvy than she lets on. You have some mad dialogue skillz.

  6. My entry is linked.
    Can we pick something happier next week? ;) Good grief, you’re making me go to dark places….

  7. Those drummers. Daggone em

  8. I have been really having fun with these!

  9. I’m in! And I’m even rocking the robot on my sidebar now…(hope that’s okay) and yes…I did have do go with but a simple poem this time….Nothing screams comfort zone more for me than The Black Crows ;)

  10. yes, indeedy, we are having some fun with the 100 Word Song! yippee!

  11. Makes me wanna get high with my husband again :( and :)

  12. Who knew Frost was into the Black Crowes?

  13. Awesome!
    Too bad it’s IMPOSSIBLE for me to say something worthwhile in only 100 words!
    This is a great idea Lance! Cheers.

  14. Once more, I got in under the wire.

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