The best aspect of being a writer is the freedom of time, imagination, and wonder. You can write four stories simultaneously.
Helene walked past smiles, head nods, and mouthed “wows” of the other musicians. She unstrapped her electric guitar, pulled it off her right shoulder and turned look at the stage. Sadie couldn’t contain her embullience.
“Leney, you did it! You just played Madison S…….”
“Daddy, I changed my mind, I’m a little hungry I want cheese ravioli too.”
Millicent rose in front of the judge. Her posture was and her face was stern but proud. She ran her manicured hands over the front of her Versace business suit, smoothing out tiny wrinkles. Her attorney, Reeve Mattox gave her left hand a gentle squeeze, but Millicent pulled away and smirked. The judge sighed and began reading.
“Millicent Stingley, on count one, murder in the first degree, the court finds you……”
“Daddy, can you open the basement door. We want to get our scooters out.”
Jake realized how importance of his relationship with Violet. Two weeks apart, under such strain and conflict had hurt him almost as much as Camille’s death. He read Mallory text one more time.
“Jake, I’ll be whatever you want me to be. I’m at The Ritz Carlton, room 327. Please come.”
He stood in front of the Hotel and dialed his phone. Violet answered.
“Vi, come home, I’ll be…..”
“Hey, um, can I go across the street to the neighbor’s house for like an hour? You’ll have to watch my sisters.”
Caleb and Breann stood in the hallway of the Hospital. Several nurses ran by and Breann saw Ava carrying a baby, swaddled in a gray blanket.
“Caleb, surely not! Not again!”
Caleb ran after Ava. She threw her right hip into an operating room door. Calen heard a lock move into place. Through a small window, Caleb saw Ava hand the infant to a nurse, who then unwrapped the child to ready for surgery. Caleb clenched his left fist and hit the window with he bottom of his hand.
“Ava! Open this door!”
Ava shook her head and walked to a green curtain and pulled it around the surgical area. Breann joined Caleb at the operating room door.
“Caleb’s what are they doing?”
Caleb’s face turned pale. He embraced Breann and whispered.
“The same…..
“Hey honey, it’s me. Just wanted to hear your voice. You can put the chicken back in the freezer. We’re eating at mom’s tonight.
I’m free, to do what I want any ole time.
This is a piece of somewhat creative nonfiction, about fiction, for Write On Edge’s “Freedom”. I hope they get what I was trying to do, here. Red ink is non-fiction.
Here’s The Soup Dragons’ I’m Free. Dance, ya’ll.

I certainly got it. That’s been every afternoon of my life this summer. Even with my kids in school again now. (They do summer school. They are more sane with a routine.)
thank you…i’m not complaining, just showing the “irony” of freedom of imagination vesus lack of freedom of real life.
Oh, what an awesome idea. I feel like a total loser because of the amount of time I actually DO have to spend writing. The fact that one of my kids is probably a better writer than me and is always free to bounce ideas off of, the fact that my husband would move the planet for me for any reason at all, yet here I sit…. excited that I wrote a measly sentence yesterday. Knowing that no mind trick or motivational blog post or tickling muse is going to write this goddamned book for me, and I am just going to have to buck up and get over myself. BAH! Damnit….
Bobina is great at giving me time and space…for the most part. Its just hard, writing with wife, kids, real job, stuff. But I still do it, and still love it.
heheheh… too fun Lance. I have only one questions… who the heck are Ava, Caleb, and Breann?
That’s “question” (shakes her head and her red pen and saunters back out to create some Parmesan tilapia, garlic potatoes and veggies for supper).
See page called crazy robot stories. It was my nanowrimo. Since shelved
sounds delicious….Crazy Robot Stories later renamed Hybrids was my first “serial”.
Thank you Lance, that I will do
P.S. it was yummy!
I heard you loud and clear. Sigh – what a life is freedom.
glad you “got it”
you’re cool. and i have always loved that song! *dances away*
thanks for thinking im cool…im not. I love that whole album…then the dragons went away
This is my life – only the writing in black isn’t as good.
thank you…but i like your writing
thanks for the 4 exclamation points
I have that problem, but the red writing is my husband.
see…more wiring
Yes. Exactly. I’d need to weave in some guilt about the household tasks that are being neglected while I write, but other than that, it sounds very familiar.
Same, Vic…
Just brilliant. When the hell is someone picking you up? Your writing, that is.
eden
no, you are, check your email.
Great post, love it and can identify (except for the “daddy” stuff)…. that sense of freedom is amazing, and you describe it really well!!!
thanks for coming by brahm
I write at work
which is less like this, believe it or not. Hmmm.
When I write at home, it’s more like this, the boys running in, wanting to type, wanting a yogurt or to read a book, John is good at keeping them occupied but hey sometimes they need their mom, need/want the attention.
but I loved your take, that freedom is double edged, that it’s worth fighting for, that it’s set WITHIN your life instead on the outskirts of it, it’s always there, it’s just always being tested.
(I think that’s a given when “mom”, “dad”, “Wife” “husband” is added to your labels.)
great comment, thank you. we’ve talked about this before. It’s a delicate balance between our art and our loves.
Oh my gosh… this is exactly what has been happening ALL morning. Every time I sit down to write I am interrupted by my minion with some random statement or question.
good Kat, I’m not in this alone…can’t wait to read your 100 word song
great post Lance. So true. I have so many characters dancing in my head and yet not enough time to get them down.
Here’s to freedom! And captivity to our passions
cheers mom!
I love what you did here! The interweaving of your stories with reality. It’s a struggle for all writers.
thanks Rox. struggle is a great word for it.
That freedom is great! The only issue I have sometimes is that much freedom can be paralyzing at times – what do I write about, which story to work on, which idea to persue…
But it is a wonderful problem to have, isn’t it?
if there’s a trouble to have, that’s the best one, or close to it.
Sigh. It’s funny, the freedom and non-freedom. I don’t get any writing done during the day. I can read with the kids in the background and upload pictures and do all sorts of writer-housekeeping, but I can’t actually get words on the screen
It makes for late nights.
I like this and how the interruptions are real life breaks in your consciousness, giving you the breath to switch into another one of your worlds.
thanks, double. from reading your blog, I know how hard it is for you to balance.
Awwww!
Okay girl noises out of the way. I love this post. I really do. I also live it, minus kids. And I bounce between the idea storms in my head and my husband’s questions and his need to have me with him when he watches TV. I wouldn’t give it up for the world.
Love the take on the prompt!
thanks…truth is I had another Helene or Millicent story lined up then the kids started their stuff and it fell into place. organic is always best.
Get. Out. Of. My. Head.
I mean not the stories. The rest though.
i knew you’d be with me on this one. I just knew.
Hmmm, some would call this freedom, others purgatory. My ADHD is enough like this without having the kids and the dogs and my wife calling my name. It takes more than a moment to get back into the moment.
Kudos to you if you can keep the trains on the tracks.
WG
I don’t think i keep it on the tracks.But i’m glad you read and related.
After 30 years in the Navy, I’m now retired and at home most of the time. Freedom at last? No. There’s a reason I call my blog Living in Kellie’s World.
haha…i’ll swim over there are check it out, sailor. thanks so much.
How true. When it comes to fiction, I always have a ton of things started. This is really only due to the fact that I am only really creative enough to set a scene and start a story, and perpetually unable to finish it.
Creative license and family do NOT always go hand in hand. If only I finished every story or blog I started!
so very true…thank you