No I’m not married or knocked up
don’t care that Holly from high school has a good job
why’s it gotta be all set and backed up?
my vision’s different from yours, but i’m no snob
there’s no timeline, there’s no date
Don’t expect anything now, I can wait
It’ll happen… I think, I hope, I want, I need
I’m not about normal, it’s a rebel creed
Got out of town, went to school
did what that right, but i wanted something more
didn’t just party and be a teenage fool
It’s music, It’s crazy, and it’s my big score
(repeat chorus three times)
****blogger’s note****
This is a song written for The Ballad of Helene Troy called Rebel Creed. I wrote twelve songs for the story. This is probably the most simple and punk based. It follows a standard C/G/F power chord. That’s all I have, music-wise. I cut about 10 words – some I’s and other articles. But you get the jist. It’s also in response to Velvet Verbosity’s 100 word challenge “Rebel” http://www.velvetverbosity.com/ Since I’ve already used Bikini Kill’s Rebel Girl in another post. I’ll drop David Bowie’s Rebel Rebel but use Joan Jett’s version to give you some idea of how this would go in a non-fictional world.
I do like this song. Sounds like something my 16 yr old would listen to.
well, we wouldn’t be in her intended demographic
LOL, this is true.
I was hoping this was for your Helene story.
i had something written for my teenager but i’ll save it for later.
Nice. Very nice. Now this is a place I have never gone. Song writing, that is. Hmmm…. perhaps. Jake’s got me stuck on the Killers today. I’m glad I’m not in high school anymore or I would have to make sure they are cool before I listen to them. Oh…. and Joan Jett…. Oh my….. She makes me sweat….. No, I did not intend that to rhyme…. crap.
Tay Tay listens to The Killers. I know they’re cool for people our age. I like The Runaways, Lita Ford, and Joan Jett. I can write lyrics and play power chords. I need your son to help me with bridges, transitions, and melody.
Nice choice to share with us for the challenge Lance!
thank you
Isn’t it a fun exercise? I wrote the songs in Divorce, and each of the ones I used in the final version of the song wound up illustrating something about the character at that point in the story. Yay for punk!
I love songwriting. I suck at it. But I love it. send me a link of your songs, please.
http://jesterqueen.com/2012/07/17/songs-from-divorce-e-mail-me-if-you-want-the-password/
I dropped the ones that made the book onto Jesterqueen (I seem to have deleted the others; I suck at this too. I’d so much rather pick a favorite song and just pretend my people wrote it, but I can’t afford the copyright.) Anyway, the password is bigsplit
There aren’t too many times where I begin to feel my age – I still feel like the 17 year old kid who ran off to join the Marines – but I can honestly say I have no idea what the names are of the groups that make up the top 10 in music today.
I have a teenager so I stay fairly up to date. thanks.
I am very impressed. Wish I could write a song…spoke volume to me as I have two teenagers. LOL However I was told to behave my age by them too so, I know exactly how a rebel feels…man, I did a few stuffs myself. Especially divorcing at 38!
I truly enjoyed that.
hugs
shakira
a mother’s love
i divorced at 36, remarried at 38. hang in there.
thank you for reading and commenting
I like this. A lot. Can I start calling you a songwriter too?
you can call me whatever you wish. Bad songwriter is better than serial killer.
You can actually CALL yourself a songwriter…that’s more than most people
I guess to really judge we need this set to music…think you can arrange that